Like this so far! Although the gruesome scene made me creep :( A suggestion : it'd be nice if you make each passage shorter, with linear links to the next or small choices that make minor change. That way it's easier to read & scroll and more convenient to save :) and another thing, "Our parents just **died**!" I think that's supposed to be bold text or sth? Maybe you used the wrong format?
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Like this so far! Although the gruesome scene made me creep :( A suggestion : it'd be nice if you make each passage shorter, with linear links to the next or small choices that make minor change. That way it's easier to read & scroll and more convenient to save :) and another thing, "Our parents just **died**!" I think that's supposed to be bold text or sth? Maybe you used the wrong format?
It would be nice if you could choose your gender.
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